For the voices I'd recommend working on emoting a bit more. The sound should be able to hold it's own, tell a detailed story without visuals. With this, I feel like animating it would benefit the scene more.
I thought I did a good job "emoting." Unless you mean adding music or something. I don't understand the comment lol, but thanks for the review.
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